Friday 23 January 2015

Persuasive Writing

This week we have been writing and editing our own persuasive texts, on whether or not we believe school uniform is a good idea.

Your task this week is to write another very important persuasive text!

As part of World Book Day 2015, David Walliams will be visiting schools all over the UK. Your task is to write a short paragraph to persuade David Walliams to come to our school. Remember, you must use your personal opinions, a few facts and lots of emotive language. Write your persuasive texts in the comment box below and we will use the best ones when we enter the competition.


You can read more information about the competition on this website; http://www.worldofdavidwalliams.com/2015/01/david-walliams-takes-sky-celebrate-world-book-day-2/#
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19 comments:

  1. Omar Hashmi24 January 2015 at 12:22

    Dear David Walliams,

    I hope you come to our school. Our school is one of the top schools in Hounslow. Our school has a big field for your helicopter to land. No sooner you step out of the helicopter, you will be surprised to see a red double decker bus, which is actually our school library.

    Everyone at school is a fan of yours. Did you know our school has the best behaviour? We are super-duper interested in reading, especially your books. I have read 'The Billionaire Boy' and found it very interesting. I am looking forward to read the rest of your books. Your visit will encourage us to continue reading more.

    This is our address:
    Chatsworth Primary School,
    Heath Road,
    Hounslow,
    Middlesex, TW3 2NU.

    Looking forward to meet you.

    Kind Regards,
    Omar Hashmi

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  2. Daniel25 January 2015 at 05:03


    My name is Daniel Horgan and I go to Chatsworth Primary school. I am in Year 3 and I have always loved reading. Every night before bedtime I read and then sneak the book under my pillow so I can finish it in the morning when I wake up.

    I would like to tell you about our school library. It is very unique and different from other libraries, it is a London Bus , from 2012. It is parked in our playground. On the lower floor of the bus we keep the Fiction books and the top deck we keep the Non Fiction.
    Once a week we are allowed to go to the bus and pick a book to take home. Our librarians are children from the classes, and they are responsible for sorting the books and keeping them in the right order.
    I have read all of your books, my favourite book is Gangster Granny. I like the characters you have in this book and most importantly it makes me laugh.
    Kind regards
    Daniel Horgan

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  3. Alishba25 January 2015 at 06:55

    Dear David Walliams,
    My name is Alishba and I would love to see you at our school ,Chatsworth Primary School. We have got a very interesting library at our school. Not only because it has so many brilliant books but also because its a bus!

    I know many amazing authors like Jacqueline Wilson, Roald Dahl and Michael Morpurgo but you are my favourite author by far.

    I love reading.Its one of my favourite hobbies. I really love borrowing all of the fantastic books from our stupendous library bus.I love how when I am reading I feel like I have been transported to another world where I am wandering the corridors of Billionare Boy`s mansion and making dresses with The Boy In The Dress.

    Yours Sincerely,
    Alishba Ali

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  4. BLAKENEY25 January 2015 at 09:07

    Dear David Walliams
    I am reading the book Billionare boy I really like it because Joe's dad made his money out of loo roll. I would like you to come to our shcool because it is the best shcool ever. I would also like you to come to out school so I can ask you questions about how you got the idea of the books Mr Stink, Gangster Granny and Billionaire Boy

    Your sinseraly BLAKENEY DEAR

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  5. simmy26 January 2015 at 10:50

    Dear David Williams,
    hi my name is Simran Gahg I like all your amazing books. I have read all your books and I like what happens in all of them. I think you are amazing at what you do. I want you to come to our school because I want you to see what we do in our classes. I hope you can come to our class we are in year 3 Thames class.

    your sincerely Simran Gahg.

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  6. KADEER26 January 2015 at 10:50

    Dear David Walliams
    our school is good and fun to be at.I have read lots of your books like billionaire boy
    and gangster granny.Our school is the best school in the world also I would like
    you to come is so I can see all of your books and how many you have made


    yours sinseraly KADEER COLE







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  7. brajan27 January 2015 at 10:59

    Dear David Williams
    My name is brajan I go to chatsworth school.I'm in year 3 and I love reading.I hope you come to our school because our school is the best school in hounslow.you will be very surprised to see our library is a very different library it's a big red bus.I love books about animals it's very interesting and I would love to read more.I really want to see you and see your books.
    Your sincerely brajan !

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  8. Unknown27 January 2015 at 11:42

    Dear, David Williams
    I really like your books because they are interesting. I hope you come to our school because its the best school in the world. I think you are amazing in writing books,so I want you to come to school so I can ask you questions about your books and to know how you came up with ideas of your books, and to show you my writing and to tell e how to write in a right way.

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  9. HADY27 January 2015 at 13:08

    Hello David Walliams

    My name is Hady and I am in Thames class, year 3. I really want you to come over in our school because children are very friendly and helpful here. Secondly, our 'Library Bus' is very special and full of wonderful books. Some of them are your's which are very interesting. I really liked the story of Billionaire Boy because his Dad make money out of loo roll.

    I look forward to see you soon in my class.

    Your sincerely,

    Abdul Hady Saleh
    Thames Class
    Chatsworth Primary School
    Heath Road
    Hounslow
    TW3 2NW

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  10. Zohan27 January 2015 at 13:40

    Our school potential is that it has Bus Library because the students like to read lots of variety of books. David Williams is a writer and he will love the Library bus.

    The school has a big field to play all sorts of sport. Even adults could play easily. David Williams is keen on fitness as he swam the English channel and so he will be able to do lots of sport. This will help others if he comes as he will be able to encourage them

    Chatsworth school has very good teachers who support us alot and allow us to reach our targets in life.

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  11. Arjun28 January 2015 at 11:59

    hello david williams i really hope you come to are class it has lot's of books i am sure it has lots of your books. Miss tracy always teaches us to make sure we reach good targets in life.she also takes really good care of us and lets us do lots of fun activites. she also lets us do experiments.I hope we get to read your books

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  12. DENISLAV29 January 2015 at 10:56

    Dear David Waliams.I hop you come to our school. we have intresting books to read in the classroom.

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  13. Anonymous29 January 2015 at 12:34

    Dear David Williams,

    My name is Giacomo, i am in Y3 Thames at Chatsworth Primary School.
    I'm writing to you because we will be honoured to have you at our school.

    You are going to find our school very interesting because our library is in a double decker bus! For sure you will find one of your books in there.

    We would love to hear lots of interesting things about your books, how you came up with the stories and why.

    Please come and meet us all.

    Yours Sincerely,

    Giacomo M. Carrafelli

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  14. maariya29 January 2015 at 12:52

    Dear Mr Walliams
    My name is Maariya and I go to Chatsworth Primary School. I would love for you to visit our brilliant school because we want to show you how much we love reading and especially great books like yours. I would like for you to read a part of Billionaire Boy to Thames Class in year three because it would be so amazing to hear you read. Chatsworth School should be your first stop on your tour to celebrate World Book Day. Our address is
    Chatsworth Primary School,
    Heath Road,
    Hounslow,
    Middlesex, TW3 2NU.
    If you get lost in your helicopter we will stand in the playground and wave to you.
    I look forward to seeing you soon.
    Yours sincerely
    Maariya.

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  15. Simran1 February 2015 at 06:52

    Dear David Walliams,

    My name is Simran and I go to a brilliant school called Chatsworth Primary School, I am in Thames class in year three. I would like if you could come and visit our amazing school. We have got a library which is in a bus. Our fiction books are at the bottom and our non-fiction books are at the top. I hope you come and visit our school as I have heard that your books are fantastic. Our address is:

    Chatsworth Primary School,
    Heath Road,
    Hownslow,
    Middlesex,
    TW3 2NW.

    I am looking forwards to be seeing you very soon.

    Yours sincerely
    Simran





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  16. Ishani1 February 2015 at 14:15

    Dear Mr Walliams. My name is Ishani Sharma. Our school would love you to come and visit us. We all love your stories and they are all creative and it makes the reader want to read more. You always use your imagination and that is important when writing a book. We have seen you on TV but we want more, we would like to see you live to meet you and most importantly talk about your fun fantastic books. I hope we have persuaded you too come to our school
    Thank you from Chatsworth Primary School.

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  17. Sahara Digital Leader4 February 2015 at 07:56

    I really like everyone's comment, very persuasive.

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  18. Gurpersaad14 February 2015 at 04:19

    dear david wilms
    I love your books and I reed lots of your books and your books are amazing.

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