This week we have been learning how to describe spooky and mysterious settings. Can you write a paragraph to describe this setting? Don't forget to include lots of amazing adjectives and at least one simile.
Write your paragraphs in the comments below.
Miss Tracey
Once open a time will I was wing in a stinky alley there was aguly house the list were on and there was a bird siting on , the roof it had
ReplyDeleteflown way and there was smock coming art of the house.
Good try, Gurpersaad. Don't forget to check your spellings!
DeleteIt is a dark, cold, still night the moon is hiding behind the clouds. There is a dim light coming from the Jack’o lantern . The house looks rickety and creepy. The shadows of the antlers horns look as spiky as a thistle.
ReplyDeleteThe magpie is as still as a statue.
It was a stormy, dark night when I was walking down Farm Lane. As I went past the old cottage I saw a big pumpkin in the front Garden. The moon was glowing in the sky like a circle of cheese. Next to the pumpkin stood an old rusty post-box. On the post-box stood a scary crow, it was as black as coal, with looming red eyes.
DeleteGreat description, Daniel. I really like your similes! I want you to start thinking about how you can include metaphors in your descriptions now.
DeleteGreat work, Zara. You have used lots of amazing adjectives. I really like your simile.
DeleteThe house was scary and small. There was a pumpkin lit outside which looked like it was on fire. A big scary, black crow was peering at me. There were antlers on the house which gave a frightening shadow. The moon in the sky was as shiny as a diamond. Suddenly black, misty smoke appeared out of nowhere.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Ishani. I like your description of the antlers and the moon
DeleteIn the dark and cold forest where the moon was shining and glimmering.
ReplyDeleteThere was a little house that had white antlers above the front door. In the house the lights were shining as bright as the yellow and orange sun.
Outside lay a pumpkin which had eyes like an evil vampire. A crow
Stood still as a statue waiting for It’s prey.
On a dark spooky night i was walking in the forest and i was very thirsty. I found myself in front of a little cottage made of stones and wood. There was a punpkin in the floor that flashed at me and there was a scary black bird with bright yellow eyes. I heard noises in the cottage but i didn't knockk at the door because i was too scared.
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On the dark night i was walking to get sweet on halloween.It was too scery because there were a lot of masks and and it was the most darkness night..There were a lof of big trees and there were a sceary bird sitting on the tree.The house was very big and dengerous.
ReplyDeleteI like scary settings but not that much. they are nice but I feel cuff table by just reading them.
ReplyDeleteOn a dark spooky night I heard shocking foots steps upstairs in this haunted dark house.I was shivering in fear then I heard more foot steps I thought it was a big black ghost in the background. It made a loud sound. It was a crow. He had seen me and decided to fly away.
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